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Crazy Reviews Corner
#1
Those will be my reviews of pony games, written in non-standard format. You'll see what I mean. And the first guest is... SILENT PONYVILLE!

CRC: Episode 1 - Silent Ponyville
CRC: Episode 2 - Twilight Escape

Please leave comments below. No, really.
Do keep in mind that I am not a native english speaking person. If you found mistype, misspelling or syntax errors, please PM me.
Don't be sad.
Even if the world does not forgive, I will forgive you.

Don't be sad.
Even if you do not forgive the world, I will forgive you.

So please tell me.
What will it take for you, to forgive me?


-Frederica Bernkastel
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#2
I found the snippets of Fanfiction completely pointless. It helps the reader if everything is on topic. Instead an optional link to it would help, unless you're trying to make a good joke/pun/reference/funny, that I missed.

The actual review size was daunting, but worth the details in my opinion. Having never played it I understood well what you were talking about, but I cannot claim how accurate it was.
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Projects-
Platform Engine Fixing -75% (Beware the Stairs)
Pony Infinity Redesign -10%
*removed 'energy' bar replaced with flight bar
*making characters more fair
*reworking abilities for optimal fun(intractable teleport anypony?)
*increasing speed limit for body collisions
*Misc(IE, stuff and things, things and stuff)

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#3
Actually writing fun intermissions was the important part. I did say it was in non-standard format, did I?
At first I tried to make it as if Pinkie plays the game but then something happeed and I don't remember the rest.
Maybe the format will change someday to that one but as for now I'll just stop at intermissions.
Don't be sad.
Even if the world does not forgive, I will forgive you.

Don't be sad.
Even if you do not forgive the world, I will forgive you.

So please tell me.
What will it take for you, to forgive me?


-Frederica Bernkastel
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#4
CRC Episode 2 - Twilight Escape

Decided to write another one. Has the same structure as the first one.
Don't be sad.
Even if the world does not forgive, I will forgive you.

Don't be sad.
Even if you do not forgive the world, I will forgive you.

So please tell me.
What will it take for you, to forgive me?


-Frederica Bernkastel
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#5
These are quite fun to read, so happy the original got its well deserved spot. Without it I wouldn't even be here.
I must have missed Twilight's escape, but your description really intrigued me. Maybe you could add all reviews to the first post as well, just to make it easier to find them all as well as posting with the latest review.
#Edit: Without it I probably wouldn't have started to enjoy making a game.
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#6
(05-25-2015, 11:21 PM)blankascent Wrote:  Maybe you could add all reviews to the first post as well, just to make it easier to find them all as well as posting with the latest review
True enough.
My first MLP game was Luna Game and I wanted to make a review of the series and fan games but... EqG already did so.
Don't be sad.
Even if the world does not forgive, I will forgive you.

Don't be sad.
Even if you do not forgive the world, I will forgive you.

So please tell me.
What will it take for you, to forgive me?


-Frederica Bernkastel
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#7
Well you're doing a good job so far, as long as it's well detailed it should be a good addition for making up ones mind to try something. If its too long the tldr summary at the end helps, not everyone enjoys mst3k antics, sadly.
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